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What happens when you get as high as the clouds and turn the corner?
Will you find heaven
Or will you find a vast plane of blue skies.
1. One verse per post
2. Stay on the subject of the most recent post
Let's see where this goes :)
What happens when you get as high as the clouds and turn the corner?
Will you find heaven
Or will you find a vast plane of blue skies.
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Permalink Reply by Panic Heart on -
when hope is overcoming lies
will you fall into a hopeless state of mind
or gain strived from dreams grown deep inside
does success not come with pride?
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Permalink Reply by Black Light GTC III on -
no depending on how u get it
thats y the successful kant believe what they did and
end up in their crib with wrists slitted
eyes towards the blu sky askin y did i
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Permalink Reply by chavonne on -
YOU TURN THE CORNER AND CLOSE YOUR EYES AND FIND THE PLACE YOUR HEART LIES
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Permalink Reply by Ekow Otoo on -
would you step onto the unknown surface
or would you stay hidden afraid of dreams
for this plane could simply be your world you can only wish it to be
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Permalink Reply by Solo 4Life on -
a true testament to the person you are inside yep so deep
conceding to the challenge means your is weak
forever you'll hold your words and memories
now where do you go from here
will this experience make you ready if ever another chance
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Permalink Reply by Shaughnessey R. Watson on -
another chance is all i ask
ive made mistakes but i apologize
blue skies
dont tell me lies
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Permalink Reply by Christopher Allen Wallach on -
What happens when you drop deep in the surface of the Earth
Will you find Hell
OR will you find a vast sea of red lava
What happens when you die
Do you begin a new life
Or are you in complete silence forever
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Permalink Reply by Gabe on -
Please answer me blue sky
I need your answer
Just one to clear my mind
my curiosity is like a cancer
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Permalink Reply by chinka on
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you'l find a place where illusions fight
to take the place of reality in broad daylight
disillusioned, you will no more cry
your comfort is in the blue skies
so set your mind at rest my child
everything will be alright
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Permalink Reply by anthony malone on -
So we keep dreaming our dreams,
and watching the skies from afar.
If you exist "heaven, that, has to be where you are.
Visible and invisible above the clouds in the light.
transferring to a beautiful star sparkling night.
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Permalink Reply by Nick K on -
i ate a cloud and it tasted puffy
kind of like a marshmallow but a little watery
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