COLORS OF MY LIFE!

I wish I could paint you a picture
For every moment that’s passed me by
A fine detailed collage of my knowledge
On an endless canvas I'd hang in the sky
I'd emphasize every saddened thought
With the darkest blue you'd ever seen
And then any jealous mischief followed
With the shades beneath emerald green
Every last trace of anger would drip
Crimson red like the blood in my veins
Thus un-enabling me to wipe the slate clean
Because split blood guarantees stains
I would cut an odd shaped chunk out
To represent every time I've been alone
And add a variety of colored strings
For all the broken hearts I have sewn
Then I will let the shadows of the emerald
And the very darkest shades of royal blue
Pour down into the sporadic shaped voids
Revealing all that could have been true
Next I would cut my art work into pieces
For all the times I've felt confused
And I'd throw a few puzzle pieces away
Representing the times I've been used
Then I would shift a piece to the back
To show all the promises that were broken
And I'd toss a few splashes of paint thinner
Which altered the truth of words spoken
I'd stand in front of my finish work
That was drenched with heart ache and pain
And I'd realize a project this creative
Is better than if it were still plain
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10 14 2012.
THIS POEM ROCKS!
THIS POEM ROCKS!
10 14 2012.
You are blessed to be so
You are blessed to be so talented.
10 17 2012.
thank you!! =)
thank you!! =)
10 14 2012.
I absolutely love this poem,
I absolutely love this poem, very nice work.
10 15 2012.
if u like this one then u
if u like this one then u should also read the poem "Faith" written by urs truly!
10 15 2012.
Wow, this is nothing short of
Wow, this is nothing short of brilliant.
10 17 2012.
thanks 4 all the wonderful
thanks 4 all the wonderful comments :)
10 15 2012.
Both wonderful and unique!
Both wonderful and unique!
10 15 2012.
hey thanks lady!
hey thanks lady!
10 16 2012.
You're welcome
You're welcome
10 15 2012.
i really appreciate great
i really appreciate great comments!
10 15 2012.
thank u to all of u!
thank u to all of u!
10 22 2012.
Nice articulation in this
Nice articulation in this poem. well mastered
10 23 2012.
Some nice poetry here.
Some nice poetry here.
10 23 2012.
amazingly talented.
amazingly talented.
10 24 2012.
very nice!
very nice!
10 25 2012.
I love it! Great job.
I love it! Great job.
10 27 2012.
I love this it makes you
I love this it makes you think about your own life and what kind of picture you would make of it all .Well done
10 29 2012.
That was banging! I really
That was banging! I really liked that.
11 02 2012.
Colorfull articulation and
Colorfull articulation and discriptive work play verry lovely from a seamingly lovely mind
11 03 2012.
BRAAAVO...
BRAAAVO...
11 07 2012.
nice,touching and creative!
nice,touching and creative!
11 10 2012.
A thought invoking poem.
A thought invoking poem. Nice.
11 12 2012.
Congratulations . Your are
Congratulations . Your are amazing.
11 16 2012.
I wish I could do this in
I wish I could do this in life , this poem evokes amazing images