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COLORS OF MY LIFE!

I wish I could paint you a picture

For every moment that’s passed me by

A fine detailed collage of my knowledge

On an endless canvas I'd hang in the sky

I'd emphasize every saddened thought

With the darkest blue you'd ever seen

And then any jealous mischief followed

With the shades beneath emerald green

Every last trace of anger would drip

Crimson red like the blood in my veins

Thus un-enabling me to wipe the slate clean

Because split blood guarantees stains

I would cut an odd shaped chunk out

To represent every time I've been alone

And add a variety of colored strings

For all the broken hearts I have sewn

Then I will let the shadows of the emerald

And the very darkest shades of royal blue

Pour down into the sporadic shaped voids

Revealing all that could have been true

Next I would cut my art work into pieces

For all the times I've felt confused

And I'd throw a few puzzle pieces away

Representing the times I've been used

Then I would shift a piece to the back

To show all the promises that were broken

And I'd toss a few splashes of paint thinner

Which altered the truth of words spoken

I'd stand in front of my finish work

That was drenched with heart ache and pain

And I'd realize a project this creative

Is better than if it were still plain

 


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DaniLady's picture

THIS POEM ROCKS!

THIS POEM ROCKS!

Tannesha_T.'s picture

You are blessed to be so

You are blessed to be so talented.

DaniLady's picture

thank you!! =)

thank you!! =)

Donald Waugh Sr.'s picture

I absolutely love this poem,

I absolutely love this poem, very nice work.

DaniLady's picture

if u like this one then u

if u like this one then u should also read the poem "Faith" written by urs truly!

Phoenix's picture

Wow, this is nothing short of

Wow, this is nothing short of brilliant.

DaniLady's picture

thanks 4 all the wonderful

thanks 4 all the wonderful comments :)

DaniPai's picture

Both wonderful and unique!

Both wonderful and unique! yes

DaniLady's picture

hey thanks lady!

hey thanks lady!

DaniPai's picture

You're welcome

You're welcome smiley

DaniLady's picture

i really appreciate great

i really appreciate great comments!

DaniLady's picture

thank u to all of u!

thank u to all of u!

Susan Lee's picture

Nice articulation in this

Nice articulation in this poem.  well mastered

SNP's picture

Some nice poetry here.

Some nice poetry here.

Endless Crimson Pain's picture

amazingly talented.

amazingly talented.

umbleets's picture

very nice!  

very nice!

 

CeAsia's picture

I love it! Great job.

I love it! Great job.

bluebutterfly's picture

I love this it makes you

I love this it makes you think about your own life and what kind of picture you would make of it all .Well done

darcon jones's picture

That was banging! I really

That was banging! I really liked that.

Nathan A. Carr's picture

Colorfull articulation and

Colorfull articulation and discriptive work play verry lovely from a seamingly lovely mind

fortittude's picture

BRAAAVO...

BRAAAVO...

Russell Ashequi's picture

nice,touching and creative!

nice,touching and creative!

arenka's picture

A thought invoking poem. 

A thought invoking poem.  Nice.

XMOTORIDERS's picture

Congratulations . Your are

Congratulations . Your are amazing.

 

tyber's picture

I wish I could do this in

I wish I could do this in life , this poem evokes amazing images


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