What School Didn't Teach
People say life is this and that
It may be a metaphor
A game of whist perhaps?
Compared to an onion
Some artichokes and alphabets
Interesting allegories but who could really answer that?
At times it's good and bad
Sweet and sad like a long lost love
To where you try to find your way
But things are so crossed up
You learn to live life like a hand in water
I wish I had a quarter for the people not as loyal
Now I've jerry-built a border
Cause' I can't take any deceit
It's not allowed like kids throwing sticks in the street
And addiction is deep
Oh how I wish I had known
Now I'm grown
And my old way of thinking was wrong
I've learned the best teacher really is experience
Aside from yourself
My every step is just as fearless as the last
And learning doesn't stop outside of class
Any Feedback Welcomed





Comments
This is real deep!! Wonderful piece!! Great Job!!
Thanks alot Adele!! I really appreciate the great review
sounds like a rap song...are u a rapper?
I don't consider myself a rapper but I do admire the rhyme.
One long deep thought and then on to the next thought
I'm feeling it
Nice!
Thanks alot!!
A very good poem!!
I appreciate the great review!!
Great write dog! This is brilliant at the least.
Very much appreciated!
We start learning the important lessons after school is over. This was an exelent write.
Thats so very true! And I appreciate the comment
Very nice
Thanks!
I learn something new everyday, i hope it never ends! Thanks!
No problem!! Thanks for reading!!
Nice
Thank!
Like I said before, you are a classic poet, with your own format. You choose your words with time it seams and power streams. It's nice to see
I appreciate the great review and I must say you're the first to label me a specific type of poet and it seems pretty accurate! While I have love for all poetry, I wouldn't feel comfortable sticking with traditional structure or having to write a certain way. I can do it but I'll feel limited and I don't think there should be any limits in self-expression..thanks for reading and much love
very honest i liked it
Man that's the only way to be and I appreciate the good review!
Deep and real poetic. Great poem!
Thank you Jewele!!
This is a solid and profound write! Thanks for expressing and sharing it. Congrats - Poem of the week!!! Blessings.
Thank you very much!!
i like very much
Thanks!!