What School Didn't Teach

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People say life is this and that
It may be a metaphor
A game of whist perhaps?  
Compared to an onion
Some artichokes and alphabets
Interesting allegories but who could really answer that?
At times it's good and bad
Sweet and sad like a long lost love
To where you try to find your way
But things are so crossed up
You learn to live life like a hand in water
I wish I had a quarter for the people not as loyal
Now I've jerry-built a border
Cause' I can't take any deceit
It's not allowed like kids throwing sticks in the street
And addiction is deep
Oh how I wish I had known
Now I'm grown
And my old way of thinking was wrong
I've learned the best teacher really is experience
Aside from yourself
My every step is just as fearless as the last
And learning doesn't stop outside of class

 


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Adele W's picture
by Adele W·Dec 11, 2012

This is real deep!!  Wonderful piece!!  Great Job!!

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 12, 2012

Thanks alot Adele!! I really appreciate the great review

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by arenka·Dec 11, 2012

sounds like a rap song...are u a rapper?

 

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by Dexsta Ray·Mar 13, 2014

I don't consider myself a rapper but I do admire the rhyme.

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by candybarboy (not verified)·Dec 11, 2012

One long deep thought and then on to the next thought
I'm feeling it

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by Phoenix·Dec 11, 2012

Nice!

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 12, 2012

Thanks alot!!

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by mr mystic·Dec 11, 2012

A very good poem!!

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 12, 2012

I appreciate the great review!!

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by SNP·Dec 12, 2012

Great write dog! This is brilliant at the least.

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 12, 2012

Very much appreciated!

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by Susan Lee·Dec 12, 2012

We start learning the important lessons after school is over.  This was an exelent write.

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 12, 2012

Thats so very true! And I appreciate the comment

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by rebirth·Dec 12, 2012

Very nice

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 12, 2012

Thanks!

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by Hope _Love·Dec 12, 2012

I learn something new everyday, i hope it never ends! Thanks!

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 13, 2012

No problem!! Thanks for reading!!

Faith's picture
by Faith·Dec 12, 2012

Nice

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 13, 2012

Thank!

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by Nathan A. Carr·Dec 12, 2012

Like I said before,  you are a classic poet,  with your own format.  You choose your words with time it seams and power streams.  It's nice to see

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 16, 2012

I appreciate the great review and I must say you're the first to label me a specific type of poet and it seems pretty accurate! While I have love for all poetry, I wouldn't feel comfortable sticking with traditional structure or having to write a certain way. I can do it but I'll feel limited and I don't think there should be any limits in self-expression..thanks for reading and much love

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by mval22·Dec 13, 2012

very honest i liked it 

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 13, 2012

Man that's the only way to be and I appreciate the good review!

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by Jewele H·Dec 13, 2012

Deep and real poetic. Great poem!

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 13, 2012

Thank you Jewele!!

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by Stephanie McKenzie·Dec 15, 2012

This is a solid and profound write! Thanks for expressing and sharing it. Congrats - Poem of the week!!! Blessings. 

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 15, 2012

Thank you very much!!

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by BEAUTIFUL DISASTER·Dec 16, 2012

i like very much

 

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by Dexsta Ray·Dec 16, 2012

Thanks!!