We'll Be Fine

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In the morning
You will draw in sweet forgiveness
Ascend to the world
With a heart weighted by solace
Pulsating with the words
Of a lover’s whispered oath
And called upon, to rise
In the sureness of their touch

Give way to the tranquil noon
Painted in bliss
Teaming with peppered silence
Here and there,
Among the singing and fluttering fowls
To visit at their will
Resting with, and codling your tiresome frame

Twist and adhere
To the lonely and empty nights
Warm within your solitude
The embers, flickering docile and contained
Levitating, directionless
To commune with the hallow darkness
And peacefully dissipate, long before you rise

But there are no more words
Only room for visions of what solace was
And pristine visions, of what solace is destined to be

Behind The Poem: 

See, the world didnt end now did it? :P I hope everyone is doing okay tonight!


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Lucid_Mind's picture
by Lucid_Mind·Dec 22, 2012

I dug this. Its a sigh of relief piece, for the fear of the supposed end of the world.

Very well done.

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by V-C-L·Dec 22, 2012

I had to write something to calm everyone's nerves, people were taking the whole Mayan apocalypse thing waaaayy too seriously. Ive even heard of some people contemplating suicide because they thought the world might actually end.. Thanks  dude,  i reallyapprecaite your comment 

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by Adele W·Dec 22, 2012

This is a brilliant piece!!  I love your habiku style of writing!!!!  So deep, beautiful AND creative!!  Keep it coming!! 

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by V-C-L·Dec 22, 2012

Thank you so much!

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by umbleets·Dec 23, 2012

Very beautiful. And you're right. we are all still here. Good pen.

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by V-C-L·Dec 23, 2012

I had a feeling we would be okay  haha.  Thank you so much for the kind words!

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by jamalbbd·Dec 23, 2012

This was a wonderful read and soadmirably written, all the best.

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by V-C-L·Dec 23, 2012

Thank you so much! I wish you all the best on this holiday season. :)