Progression
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I’m reaching high
I will teach those low
When path seems correct
I’m staying on the road
Crystal clear focus
When everything is happening and there’s no time for hoping
I want the castle hunt mission
Urban approach ambition
Mute the spirit murders
Things are only as dreadful as I self load my head up with
Then a touch of gratification
In the bliss of consummation
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This is a powerful, inspirational piece!! Great job!!
thanks Adele!
My pleasure Fam!! Keep it coming:-)
For sure =)
Brilliant and profound. well done. Moogie.
Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated!
It's a real pleasure friend. lovin your work. Moogie.
Upward movement is necessary possessing the clarity to know when to stay on course is what I took from this piece. I like the flow and rhyme scheme here. The title lends itself well here.
"Mute the spirit murders" -what a metaphor here.....deep
Keep spilling ink my friend.
Thank you Poet_In_Motion, feels good to know I impressed an impressive poet like you
Nicely written
thanks
very interesting write
thanks
Congratulations on being chosen poet of the week with this poem. You deserve it> Keep working hard, and God will bless.
thanks arenka for your motivating feedback
very relatable nicely done !