Clarity

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I want my mind to be so clear,

That I can see the bare,

Bottom of the ocean,

Through the tidal waves in motion,

Block out all of the commotion,

So I can be in locomotion,

With my thoughts of peace and tranquility,

Giving me the ability,

To explore,

The corridor,

So I can open the right door,

To soar for more than I have ever bargained for,

Washing up the shore,

The treasure of Wealth and Happiness galore,

I know my future will be bright,

As I continue to do what’s right,

Keeping my inner smile,

While I freestyle,

Through treacherous seas,

Maintaining my fluidity,

Cutting through currents,

Cause they can’t conquer me,

As I pump up my vibes,

To come alive,

The more I ride,

The waves of life,

I can withstand every tide,

That tries to divide,

My spiritual flow,

That will guide,

Me to the other SIDE!!!!!


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MzEllaD's picture
by MzEllaD·Jan 30, 2013

I Love This Piece

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by Adele W·Feb 3, 2013

Thank you so much sweetheart!!:-)

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by BilleeLovesReagan·Jan 30, 2013

so good!

Adele W's picture
by Adele W·Feb 3, 2013

Thank you so much sweetheart!!:-)

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by BilleeLovesReagan·Jan 30, 2013

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Adele W's picture
by Adele W·Feb 3, 2013

Hahahha!!!!  You know my birthday is coming 022276:-) 

Jewele H's picture
by Jewele H·Jan 30, 2013

Great wordplay, great piece overall!

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by Adele W·Feb 3, 2013

Thank you so much Sweetheart!!:-)

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by Lucid_Mind·Feb 1, 2013

You know I thought of the song by Sade called "Flow" when I read this. This was a relaxing write...if that makes sense.

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by Adele W·Feb 3, 2013

Thank you so much Lucid!!  I LOVE me some Sade..  I humbly appreciate you.  You're so right; it does have that smooth flow and comparing 'Clarity' to Sade's 'Flow'; you know how to make a lady blush:-)

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by moogster·Feb 4, 2013

Love this little Queenie, I'd like to have a mind like that too, uncluttered,. Some beautiful visuals. Well done. Best wishes n hugs. Moogie.

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by Adele W·Feb 13, 2013

Thank you so much Moogie.  You can my King; just try to find some time to tune out all distractions and just tune into silence, feel the universe..;-)  Best wishes and tight hugs to you:-)

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by kdnc·Mar 12, 2013

Wow what a nice ride through the ocean girl!! Loved it, just perfection!! :)

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by Adele W·Apr 13, 2013

Thank you so much girl!!  Hahahaaa!!  I glad you enjoyed the ride.  I humbly appreciate your love my fellow Poetess!!:-)