Clarity
I want my mind to be so clear,
That I can see the bare,
Bottom of the ocean,
Through the tidal waves in motion,
Block out all of the commotion,
So I can be in locomotion,
With my thoughts of peace and tranquility,
Giving me the ability,
To explore,
The corridor,
So I can open the right door,
To soar for more than I have ever bargained for,
Washing up the shore,
The treasure of Wealth and Happiness galore,
I know my future will be bright,
As I continue to do what’s right,
Keeping my inner smile,
While I freestyle,
Through treacherous seas,
Maintaining my fluidity,
Cutting through currents,
Cause they can’t conquer me,
As I pump up my vibes,
To come alive,
The more I ride,
The waves of life,
I can withstand every tide,
That tries to divide,
My spiritual flow,
That will guide,
Me to the other SIDE!!!!!
Any Feedback Welcomed





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I Love This Piece
Thank you so much sweetheart!!:-)
so good!
Thank you so much sweetheart!!:-)
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Hahahha!!!! You know my birthday is coming 022276:-)
Great wordplay, great piece overall!
Thank you so much Sweetheart!!:-)
You know I thought of the song by Sade called "Flow" when I read this. This was a relaxing write...if that makes sense.
Thank you so much Lucid!! I LOVE me some Sade.. I humbly appreciate you. You're so right; it does have that smooth flow and comparing 'Clarity' to Sade's 'Flow'; you know how to make a lady blush:-)
Love this little Queenie, I'd like to have a mind like that too, uncluttered,. Some beautiful visuals. Well done. Best wishes n hugs. Moogie.
Thank you so much Moogie. You can my King; just try to find some time to tune out all distractions and just tune into silence, feel the universe..;-) Best wishes and tight hugs to you:-)
Wow what a nice ride through the ocean girl!! Loved it, just perfection!! :)
Thank you so much girl!! Hahahaaa!! I glad you enjoyed the ride. I humbly appreciate your love my fellow Poetess!!:-)