Hurricane Me

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I’m a mutable force from mother earth
Inevitable formation from the heat of the south,
But you choose what side you can get,
An addicting fierceness you won’t forget.

Yet craves for the right land of a man to adore,
Uncovered potential to make you hit the floor.
You will be curious as my wind starts to roar,
All attention on me when the clouds start to form,
Drawing you in the magnetic field of my storm.

I’m an extreme monsoon of fantasy and truth…
Is it love or hate for you?
Been known to destroy a obstacle or two,
Choose love…its good for you..

It’s your decision how you want it,
An enchanting love if you invite it,
An infatuating storm if you let it,
An waste of a rush if you try to prevent it,
Handle with care and you’ll crave it,
Severely incorrect if you think you can predict it,
Cross it wrong and you’ll never forget it.
A wrath of the ocean if you try to control it.

Maybe the wrath comes from the void within,
Hollow…the eye in the middle of the fury,
Still a whirlwind of passion to make your world blurry,
If your scared…here I come…better run…hurry.

Behind The Poem: 

Deep and passionate..gentle..but a force to be reckoned with. Me.


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Tannesha_T.'s picture
by Tannesha_T.·Dec 28, 2011

I like this poem alot.expressive and impressive

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by daniellaella·Dec 28, 2011

thank you:)

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by D Hunter·Dec 28, 2011

Very nice

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by daniellaella·Dec 29, 2011

Thank you:)

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by ExpressedWordz·Dec 28, 2011

This is dope girl!! I can visualize it like it's right in front of me!!! Good job! :)

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by daniellaella·Dec 29, 2011

lol a vision was the goal:)

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by storyofmylife·Dec 28, 2011

i really liked this. good job!(:

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by daniellaella·Dec 29, 2011

Thank you:)

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by Solo·Dec 29, 2011

Amazing poem. The deepness and passion can be well felt.

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by daniellaella·Dec 29, 2011

thank you:) I appreciate you considering this poem amazing:)

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by @RE_The_Poet·Jan 1, 2012

Great job, & well done. keep up the good work.

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by daniellaella·Jan 1, 2012

thanks!! I'll definitely try:)

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by Kamille-7·Jan 1, 2012

nice !

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by daniellaella·Jan 1, 2012

thanks!!

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by Robert Magill·Jan 1, 2012

Very clever treatment of whirlwind phenomenon. Congrats!

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by daniellaella·Jan 1, 2012

thank you!

D Hunter's picture
by D Hunter·Jan 1, 2012

Congrats on poem of the week! :-)

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by daniellaella·Jan 1, 2012

lol thanks!! I didn't realize it was until I saw this comment:)

Tannesha_T.'s picture
by Tannesha_T.·Jan 1, 2012

Congratulations on poem of the week. Well deserved;)

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by daniellaella·Jan 1, 2012

awww thank you!!!

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by Hope _Love·Jan 2, 2012

Love fills the void inside its true,Congrats on poem of the week!

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by daniellaella·Jan 2, 2012

I agree....thanks for reading:)

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by zeauoxian·Jan 6, 2012

luved the 4th line in verse 1.. gr8 writing ..keep the ink flowing

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by daniellaella·Jan 23, 2012

lol thank you!