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Circles
She held her daughter in her arms
As she felt a mothers love,
Her husband, a casualty of war,
Watches from above.
She helped her daughter learn to walk
And fed her with great care
She helped her dress each morning,
And brushed her golden hair.
She watched her daughter as she grew,
And cried as she said I do.
The grandkids knew a grandmas love.
Their years together flew.
She helped her mother as she walked.
She fed her with great care.
She helped her dress each morning,
And brushed her silver hair.
She holds her Mother in her arms
As she feels a daughters love.
And feels her father’s presence
As she joins him up above
Behind The Poem:
observing life
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Lyrical! I love the rhythm you have made with words. Simply brilliant!
Thanks for your comment. Much appreciated
This is a well-written poem about cirles, it just let us all know how life evolves around those we
love and it just keep going around to each generation like a cicle of family and friends, etc
this poem portrayed so much family love and ties between a mother and a daughter and they
both thought about the one they loved when they were caring for each other. Its strange how life really is on this earth. I enjoyed reading it today.
Thank you that means a lot to me
WONDERFUL POEM YOU ARE AMAZING AT POEMS AND POETRY AND ME AND YOU HAVE ALOT IN COMMON BOTH GREW THROUGH SO MUCH PAIN AND LIVE TO HELP OTHERS OUT SO WE CAN TELL THEM WE BEEN THROUGH IT AND SURVIVED AND SO CAN YOU.I LOVE YOU SUSAN LEE .
Your a great man, dont forget that
This makes me remember when my mom died. This is a beautifull poem.
Sad times. Thank you
wow another master piece from you Susan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
From you thats an honor. Thanks
This is a beautiful poem Susan! I Love everything about it. Made me think about my mother and grandmothers, I miss them...I LOVE your poetry
You have been such an inspiration to many people on this site. Thank you so much
Nice story telling Susan, you one of the best.
You are one of the best. I love your work
I know of these circles,I am seeing them unfold in my life.From mothers to grandmothers to wonderful daughters,a blessing to us from Our God Almighty!Thanks and Praise with all my love! Thank you for this beautiful poem! God Bless!
Thank you so much. I wish you strength on your journey
congratulations on gettin the poem of the week
Thank you so much. It means a lot comming from such a talented poet
the way you arrange the unlimited love in words . . . Is awesome . . . I salute you my dear . . . . . :-)
nicely done; beautiful from begining to middke to end
That was beautiful, and so sad.
Bittersweet. Thank you so much for your comment.
Beautiful, I like the easy transitioning, you can see it was very natural for you to do, I must think as I ponder on your poem, it just flowed out of you didnt it?
Very Nice
Thank you so much for your comment
This poem is wonderful both makes me want to cry and hug someone. Great job!!!!
Hug someone. Hug a lot of people. You can never get enough hugs
this made me cry.
Thank You.
Sorry but this is the circe of life. There is always pain and beauty happening.
Awwwwwww... That was a beautiful poem :)
Thank you for taking the time to liave a comment. I love your name.
this is my favorite of yours
Susan, you were right....I loved it!! The circle of life, from beginning to end....I found it very moving and so heart felt.
Mischelle :)
Beautiful ! What a talented lady you are:)
always
wishingUwell
Mia
wow what a feeling thats awsome excellent job grasping the moment through out the years
Amazing write my friend :)
Sorry I don't comment more on everyones work.. all work not enough play ;)
Ps.. congrats on featured poet
I felt every word.
Thank you so much for your nice comment
When I read this I cried as it brought back memories of my mother..
I entered my 1st contest I didn't but they are publishing in one of their books.It was about my mother-its the one titled I no longer see her physically I hear her when she speaks to me..
Thank you for you have touched my not once but twice today;I would be honored if you'd except me as a friend..
Your ability to create such a masterpiece is very well recognized. Peace
Thank you so much shyhee. I appreciate that so much
Aww, this was such a sweet poem. ♥
It could really bring tears to someones eyes.
I loved it. You write from the heart. It made me cry. Thinking about all the lonely days and nights without my son that was killed.