I need some help!!!!!

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Piper_Cubb45
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Hi, I have to have a short story or long poem --about a page or so. but it has to mean something to me and I cant write it and I was wondering if anyone knew one or had one about becoming a mother of a little boy and the biological father leaving and a real man stepping up

it could cover all of that, me talking to my boyfriend (the guy that has stepped up and has made the influence on my little boy), me talking to my little boy, or telling the biological father how much i hate him

PLEASE HELP!

THANK YOU =]

Sonya
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I would suggest asking for advice on how to form your poem versus asking others to flat-out do it for you.  No offense, but you have to work for what you want in life...if you have stuff handed to you it will hmake it hard to find your own unique originality.  Plus, if someone writes this for you, it would be plagurism to claim that work as your own.  I would never give up my copyright options with my poetry and am sure not many others will either.

noireangel
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Do you mean you were directed not to write it, or you're just having difficulty?

 

controversal
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if your asking someone to write a poem for you thats ridiculous, if you just want to read a nice poem about hating someone thats also ridiculous. good day.

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i said good day.

lastingerstung
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Could it be that your asking for advice about your life?

Do you think you'll hear it clearer if its in the form of a poem?

Better yet are you willing to take it.

But never forget the best advice given

is that you don't have to take it....

DaniLady
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if you r having issues writing about one subject, then u should deff. pick a different topic! i find when i have writers block, its because i havent completely wrapped my mind around the idea of finally being able to put my mind at ease due to the rareness or the severity of the topic at hand! maybe u should try a different approach! like looking through the eyes of the loser dad who is finally coming to terms with what he did so wrong in the first place. and now he's being punished by watching his lil boy grow up in the arms of another man!....just an idea...oh and ps. poems dont have to rhyme either! so just write whatever comes to ur mind! i'm sure u will do great ! and please post ur finished work for me to read! im quite curious what u'll come up with! ;)

arenka
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hi,

It sounds as if u want someone to write a poem for you, and as was mentioned previously, that would be plaigarism, which is illegal, if you then used it.

Howeveer, you have a great premise for a poem, or story right there in your forum.  Make those points the bones of the poem, and then just fill in the lines in between to make the muscles, and meat of the piece.  I am sure you can do it, if you consider yourself a writer.

Good luck and God bless u

 

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I am having the hardest time posting my poetry. I keep getting an outline or back cover to my entire post? can anyone help me with that?