love's death

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loves death came to soon

it came to fast

it happened slowly

love hung it's self

it was lost

it was alove

it was in the dark

it was tired of trying

love hung it's self

it was so broken it couldn't live

love's death came to soon

Behind The Poem: 

mike and i r over he left me 2day dnt know wat i'm gonna do i'm a single mother of twins now


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Scoby Jones's picture
by Scoby Jones·Aug 20, 2012

that's how it feels when love dies

nice work

emma's picture
by emma·Aug 20, 2012

thx it jst sux :(

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by Elizabeth·Aug 21, 2012

Wow nice poem keep up the good work I'm so sorry. To hear that I know how you feel a long time ago my x bf left me. And hurt me so bad we were together for 8 Years It does suck. Now I'm happily engaged now to a wonderful man who is also on this poem sight. Stay strong your a strong woman

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by emma·Aug 21, 2012

thank you ur sweet