Love's Wings
Love’s Wings
Minds touch new love blooms
The tender bud still anew
The embryo stirs
It opens joining two hearts
Fragile in its infancy
Love blossoms hands join
Passion fills the eyes with hope
Lips so tender meet
Soon vows are spoken hearts sealed
Two are one soul mates are bound
Loves journey begins
Hearts aflame with love and joy
Tis in nigh full bloom
Their love blossoms full through birth
Hills and glens they meet with time
Scraped knees smiles and tears
Time flies on gossamer wings
Soon an empty nest
Once more they are two yet one
Their family grows again
More to fill their hearts
Blooms that grows so rich and sweet
Carry on their seed
Time now wilts the flowers blush
then there is just one who weeps
She cries lonely tears
He comes down to pluck his rose
On winged love they rise
This is about two people that meet marryhave kids then grandkids then pass away.
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A very touching poem, I liked it a lot. Good job Susan.
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them very much
Romantic and touching.
Thank you so much Randy. I enjoy your poetry very much
How nice, gentle and well receive. Great write Susan. I enjoyed every moment of it.
Thank you so much. I feel honored by your words
Reading your well crafted stanza made me relish in its eloquence.
Thank you beautiful lady. I much appreciate it
Nice, enjoyed reading! touching poetry! But I think "Love comes from love. That's present and present forever."
I love this. I love how the grandkids are portrayed. I love the ending
freakin good. This is one of my faves
Very very touching poem!! I could def see the imagery in this piece...very nice and well written! Thank you :) Keep em comin'!!!
great job
What a warm hearted piece of work.
havent heard the abstract poet in a while.
definitely a work of art and made me think.
love it ;)
A very touching poem, a very rhythmic and fluid way of conveying the truth about love -- it's not easy but, if it's true, then it will prevail. Also this poem is written in a nice crisp format... Awesome!
So beautiful!! I enjoyed reading
Amazing write. The picture you paint with words displays how very much talented you are. Let me know when your work is published in a book.
Awesome!
Very nice Susan!
This is indeed an exellent piece of art...thank u Susan
Beautiful and touching this poem truly conveys feeling of loves!
"Time now wilts the flowers blush" what a play with words. "Love blossoms hands join" what a beautiful transition between the two and symbolically it fits
Congrats Suzan! This was a well written and deserving piece. Blessings as always kindhearted one. !
Congratulations on your well deserved poem of the week Susan. Your are amazing.
Hello Suzan i love it sensitive !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Gongratulations
Congratulations Susan. Your are amazing.
Great rythem and flow doll, much sublime!
beautiful!
You have a verry lovely poem well articulated and thoughtfull
wow u gave me goose bumps! that is a fantastic poem well written when they do that! i luv that! very fantastic job susan!
wow u gave me goose bumps! that is a fantastic poem well written when they do that! i luv that! very fantastic job susan!
wow u gave me goose bumps! that is a fantastic poem well written when they do that! i luv that! very fantastic job susan!
wow u gave me goose bumps! that is a fantastic poem well written when they do that! i luv that! very fantastic job susan!
wow u gave me goose bumps! that is a fantastic poem well written when they do that! i luv that! very fantastic job susan!
Wow! magnificient work.
viewed in art that can be a lifetime treasure, you have created this so great.
Bravo!
jett
Wowwwww. And awwwwww. This is beautiful! It perfectly conveys the journey of love through a person's life. Or, the lucky one's, at least. Very well done.
it was nice i am always looking out for your work susan i love it.
What can I say that others haven't already resounded....A beautiful poetic voice grew wings and soared all over this page....awesome.
beautiful
Very tender and sweet.
The depth if this poem is of an ocean...I love it
Heartwarming and quite sad at the same time. I really enjoyed reading this, three times in fact. A very nice read, thank you.
A beautiful love story with a sad and beautiful end well done.
The last two stanzas were touching. They were my favorite part.