Who Am I to Poetry

Adele W's picture
Submitted by Adele W on Wed, 01/16/2013 - 8:22am
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To the vibes of Poetry,
I will always flow with thee,
Rhythms of the Universe,
Within every verse,
To break the curse,
From the start,
From my heart,
Endless ~ endings,
Of deprogramming many minds to mend,
From those 'villeins,'
Straight from heaven to defend,
Against all those zombies who pretend to comprehend,
Your love for them which you fully extend,
But your future with those souls is a dead end,
I want you to know that you’re godsend,
As I’m sending tidal waves,
To save you,
From those who want to enslave you,
So they can engrave,
Their mark of the beast,
And gather you up like cattle to feast,
For fellow priests,
I’m sending you positive, polarized vibes,
From the East,
To wake up lives,
Who fell asleep,
Protecting the sheep,
Like Lil Bopeep!!!!!
 


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Rae Martin Lloren's picture
Submitted by Rae Martin Lloren on Wed, 01/16/2013 - 9:39am.

Nice Poem

Adele W's picture
Submitted by Adele W on Fri, 01/18/2013 - 10:25am.

Thank you!!

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Submitted by Asiaxox on Wed, 01/16/2013 - 11:40am.

nice. ... respect. 

Adele W's picture
Submitted by Adele W on Fri, 01/18/2013 - 10:24am.

Thanks.

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Submitted by ExpressedWordz on Wed, 01/16/2013 - 12:04pm.

This was FREAKIN awesome!!!! I loved it...great job and very unique....I love the flow...it was very very nice! Thank you Adele :)

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Submitted by Adele W on Fri, 01/18/2013 - 10:26am.

Thank you so much Mr. Express!!  I humbly appreciate the Love.:-)

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Submitted by Jewele H on Wed, 01/16/2013 - 12:26pm.

Great wordplay and great poem! Werk ;)

Adele W's picture
Submitted by Adele W on Fri, 01/18/2013 - 10:27am.

Thank you much Ms. Jewele.:-)

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Submitted by moogster on Wed, 01/16/2013 - 3:00pm.

You know Adele, I'd love to see this great poem performed on stage, it has such a good flow, and I could hear a beat all the way through. Read with real feeling, this would be incredible. It's just like a rap song, has a lot of depth and feeling. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up my friend. Best wishes. Moogie.

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Submitted by Adele W on Fri, 01/18/2013 - 10:23am.

Thank you much Moogie.  I humbly apppreciate your love.  Much Respect and Best Wishes to You too!!:-)

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Submitted by theSoulist on Thu, 01/17/2013 - 8:52pm.

this poem was good and your wordplay was cool, I like :) check out my new poem Just Business when you get the chance to :)

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Submitted by Adele W on Fri, 01/18/2013 - 10:21am.

Thank you Mr. Soulist.  If you show love, you never have to ask me to do the same.  It is in my nature to always return love when it is given to me. :-)

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Submitted by DiiamondBlack92 on Sat, 01/19/2013 - 9:46pm.

Love the way it just flows  your play on words Great READ 

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Submitted by Adele W on Sun, 01/20/2013 - 4:06am.

Thank you so much for your love Diamond!!  Much Love and Respect to You!!:-)

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Submitted by kdnc on Sun, 01/20/2013 - 1:42pm.

I am smiling so big reading this girl!!! Love the way you wrote this,your words are so expressive!

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Submitted by Adele W on Tue, 01/22/2013 - 5:55am.

Thank you so much Lovely.  I humbly appreciate your love.  I hope your holidays was Lovely!!  Stay Blessed my dear!!:-)

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Submitted by Poet_In_Motion on Mon, 01/21/2013 - 4:15pm.

I'm smiling because this is what this poem here does....your energy hits the reader with a one two punch. I agree with the others great word play and your unique poetic voice shines through every time. I love the last line also. Great job!

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Submitted by Adele W on Tue, 01/22/2013 - 5:59am.

Awww. Thank you so much my Love!!  I tried to come from the heart the best way I could to express what poetry is to me.  I love writing poetry.  It fulfills me so much because God gave me this gift and I am so humbly thankful when I can send messages out to my people.  Much Love to You!!  Stay Blessed!!:-)