My Scars

Nikki's picture
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ive learned to hide my scars

the ones under my sleeves

cuz people treat me different

when they see whats underneath

they ask me if im suicidal

but i answer with no reply

i just put my head down

and i silently cry

they dont know the pain

that i went through everyday

they dont kno that sorrow

i try to forget each day

they never see the tears

that i cry every night

they only see the scars

i tried to keep from sight

they only try to judge me

and say that it iz wrong

i tried many times to stop

but that feeling dont last long

Behind The Poem: 

just some thing i came up with


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Soul2Squeeze's picture

I like this, it's deep. Pretty good, and it's relatable. Take Care! :p

moogster's picture

I try to understand why people would self harm, and would never judge anyone. I think your poem is truly a great well written poem, that everyone should look at. Now I have more insight. I always had a lot of empathy. and my heart goes out to you. I care. I suffer from Depression, the feelings you have. I have too.

I just want to thank you, for the education, and wish you, my very beat love and best wishes. Please seek help. in my thoughts and prayers. Pete.

twelveof8's picture

This is a wonderful piece.  It's a tough subject to take on and you took it on and did a great job.  Thank you for this.

umbleets's picture

A very sad and so often true expression of how some people cope with their sorrows. Nice pen. :)

romey raman's picture

Good one dear ,
take care god bless

randy johnson's picture

This is a great poem. The words are deep, powerful and moving. I give it 5 stars. Keep up the good work.

Nikki's picture

thanks

Boomzy's picture

I am a former self-injurer..... mostly. I had a minor relapse, but I think that's through.. Anyway, I understand how it is to be judged for scars. I have to wear long sleeves to job interviews. There is a great deal of stigma around self-injury and mental health in general. Mostly, I don't care if people judge me for that or anything else. It helps sort through the jerks more quickly. It just sucks with jobs and such things since society's just one big popularity contest. C'est la vie. Peace.

SNP's picture

Congratulations on the Poem of the Week! Very powerful poem and I felt your while reading this. Stay strong babygirl :)

RSH's picture

Oh my gosh. When I read this poem, I thought to myself, this could be writing the poem. As it was exactly how I felt. Every world had a powerful story withing it that expresses pain and emotions. You have a wonderful skill.

kdlipphardt's picture

I know what you're feeling. haven't gone that far but , close. Keep mwriting and letting it out, it does help.

Jewele H's picture

Wow this was sad to read but yet relatable to those who suffer from self-harm and have thought about committing suicide. It's never the answer and the best solution is to always stay strong and keep your head up despite whatever you're going through. Nice job

meganloves13's picture

I still self harm so I could easily relate to this. wonderful poem<3

PoeticSensationz's picture

Wow great way in explaining such a sad and powerful mesage. It was deep and heart felt.

Larry_Skyllz's picture

well-written piece, you definitely hit a key issue a lot of people have...its tough when you feel this way...great write

Nikki's picture

thanks for all the support .. means alot

Poetic_Personality's picture

Really enjoyed reading this poem give me a clear underastanding on why people hurt themselves