Jealous Rage
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Heart went cold
Body went numb
Counting backwards from 100
To try and calm my self down
A jealous rage
I see nothing but red
Soul turning blacker by the second
Anger begins take over
Jealous rage
Negative thoughts running through my mind
Shaking as if I were going through a withdrawl
Yelling and screaming till I lose my voice
Wanting so bad to put my hands around your neck and just
Jealous rage
Take a breath
Count backwards from 5 4 3 2
Damn I can't even get 1 without wanting to choke u
My anger rising again
Praying, asking God to help me with this rage
Tell me
Was she worth this jealous rage
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Great poem. Yes sometimes people do get jealous and sometimes they get way too jealous. I live very close to a lake and a man was so jealous that he murdered someone while he was at this lake. He hit him hard in the head with a big rock. I'm glad that you wrote this. It might help people not to be so jealous.
Thank jealously can be ugly and it can bring out the worst in people
I felt that cold feeling in this
Loved it... Good stuff
Thank you
Excellemt poem! I love the subject as well! Jealousy can really be something else
Thank you jealously is something dangerous... u gotta be careful with who hearts u play with
Jealousy is a cold thing. It can destroy many people at once. Many deaths are attributed to it. I enjoyed this poem for its honesty in looking at it.
Jealously is cold that is true.... thank you
Oh the rage! Thanks for sharing!
Rage is something. Thanks 4 reading
it sounds awesome.. love it
Thank U :)
I liked the use of red, although maybe there is too much of it. Raw is good. Hard to dispute. Few people write of their own negative sides. Good work.