dreaming with a broken heart
you tear me to pieces,
and leave me to die.
my head falls and I sleep.
I hear a voice and it tells me
"Sleep on sweet dreamer,
He loves you,
You'll see.
He doesn't know what to do."
I'm in a brand new world.
I see a light,
and a life there with you.
I hear you tell me,
that the voices words were true.
My heart is mended,
but I don't forget,
how you told me this wasn't love.
You aren't my only,
and I won't tell you any of this,
but when I wake up dear,
I hope that I can love on.
I was woken suddenly by hearing you say,
"it was all just a game."
I tried not to cry,
but cry I did.
I thought of the voice that would say
"cry now, sweet dreamer,
you're woken up now.
You just don't know what to do.
let this be a lesson to always remember,
When you dream with a broken heart,
the hardest thing to do,
is wake up."
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10 19 2011.
I understand from your poem
I understand from your poem that when you are heart broken there is still hope, it's not the end of the world. Good poem.
10 19 2011.
I enjoyed reading it,
I enjoyed reading it, thoughtful, and you give the reader a glimpse into your inner thoughts. Very good.
10 19 2011.
I enjoyed reading it,
I enjoyed reading it, thoughtful, and you give the reader a glimpse into your inner thoughts. Very good.
10 19 2011.
Oh sweetie! I love that! This
Oh sweetie! I love that! This is my favorite poem of yours. It has a superb flow to it.
10 19 2011.
thanx!!!!!!!!!! I really
thanx!!!!!!!!!! I really don't know why this came to me so easily, but I'm glad it did.
10 19 2011.
Definitely love this. Really
Definitely love this. Really great job on this poem!!
10 19 2011.
thanx
thanx
10 19 2011.
Good job Windy, that's a good
Good job Windy, that's a good one & I like it
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