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Eternity

Eternity is perhaps not a time length or a second it can be just a feeling of completeness with everything or maybe someone. As I had a fine moment dancing with her in her room, I wanted forever to never let go.. holding her and as she held me.  Like a walk down a street where you do not care where it leads because that doesn't matter when the feeling of freedom and love over take the limitations. 

When passing by a flower blooming I asked how long will you be open? and it replied I am in the radiance of light and as long as the light shines I will be here.  But then I reply... well the clouds and the darkness obscure the light sometimes,  no says the flower the light finds a way to shine through even the smallest opening.  

When in darkness I look for the light in my mind which opens a window to understand all the mystery why all this happens, maybe just for me in my existentialistic mood at this time and no other meaning.  For each life is on an extremely unique arrow that points to a direction that shares with all but on it's own path... now that is special 

 It is funny how many times I used a time measurement already in this writing when really time is only for clocks and observers of space. When you are in radiance you can separate from time.. from sorrow.. form any negative influence.

That night of dancing in her room never did end for me.. I still here the music.. light of her eyes..her smile, holding hands and being one.    

Behind The Poem: 
Experiance of a moment

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Hope _Love's picture

I love this poem. You have

I love this poem. You have beautifully turning thoughts.

Writer on Walls Red's picture

Thanks very much!

Thanks very much!


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