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"Bite of Passion"

“Bite of passion”
In hours of darkness, they come to prey
On their feasting day
Deceased they lay
Victims soon decay
Dragged away

Nibbling
Fangs dribbling blood
Creatures packed in gangs
A preachers cross hangs
Reciting of prayer, frightening features as they stare

Creatures in the night play upon your fright
Cry out for help
Blink of an eye
They leave their bite
Leaving behind, despair

Now you become queen of night
Afraid of light
Unforeseen until Halloween night
Scene of fright, passion of the bite
In hours of darkness, you now belong

Creature of night, queen at first bite
© Heather Bolden 10/11

Behind The Poem: 
Some Halloween fun!

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LindyWindy's picture

VAMPIRES ROCK!!!!!

VAMPIRES ROCK!!!!!

zannychic2002's picture

lol! yes they do

lol! yes they do

King Crayton's picture

Agreed. Also, im loving this

Agreed. Also, im loving this holiday spirit. The dark edge to it really increases the creative spark and makes it that much better a poem. And it was a terrific poem to begin with. Great Job, as always

zannychic2002's picture

Oh King Crayton, I'm blushing

Oh King Crayton, I'm blushing over here! lol
Thank you for reading, and for the positive words :)

Tommy Chesterfield's picture

I've always wanted to be

I've always wanted to be queen of the night!lol

LAKESHA BRYER's picture

LOVELY THIS IS OFF THE

LOVELY THIS IS OFF THE CHAIN...

zannychic2002's picture

@ Tommy Chesterfield..lol!!

@ Tommy Chesterfield..lol!! Your too funny

@ LAKESHA BRYER Thank you!

Anonymous's picture

Nice clarification of words

Nice clarification of words and use of language

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