**Freestyle** 2
Please don’t look at my outward
appearance and make a false judgment.
My outward only reflex
what anyone else can see
nothing more
made from dust is my exteriority.
you will look at me and think
stereotypical thoughts
but who are you to say where my roots were brought up
if you see me walking on the street
or waiting in line publicly
don’t be too quick to judge my existence please.
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11 03 2010.
I really like this. I can't
I really like this. I can't lie sometimes I do think that about strangers especially white girls, but not in a negative jealous hate kind of way though. Now that I've read this poem I will try not to think that way from now on. I'm glad I read this because sometimes people are just ignorant to life from another side and like most people sometimes I occasionally let myself be one of those people.
11 03 2010.
I like that you say that
I like that you say that because we do judge people by there outside appearance so fast. We see attractiveness, homely and all sorts of things but the one we never touch on is some one else’s feelings or insecurities, because we see so much more before. I like what you have to say.
11 03 2010.
Thank you for your comments
Thank you for your comments and appreciation. It truly means a lot to me. Nice to know that my words can do something for someone. Afrer all, God did give us this talent to work for his good. If we arent using it positively then what good is it at all?
11 03 2010.
u really r talented and
u really r talented and skilled.sounds like it comes out naturally.i like it.like fb ill figure dis out soon n start posting something up.i like your words though :)
11 03 2010.
Yeah This site is pretty
Yeah This site is pretty simple which is what I like about it. Thanks for your comment. Cant wait to read your work.