A Love without a Song

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by SnowPoetry·Jan 22, 2012·2 comments

 

A Love without a Song
By: Adam M. Snow
 
I humble not for I but to wake again
Even though I may have sinned,
I've sinned for you, not for I.
I've loved no one but myself.
I dream of no one but I.
 
But it's you I see at night.
It is you my reflection choose,
Not your ghost for my sake but I.
 
But I humble not for I and not for you;
I humble without saying, an unjust love.
I see what of the world behind us.
I see an unjust life of eternal bliss,
A love without a song;
I see the forever us.
 
I humble now and forever among all things.
Until I see again, I am blind to you.
Until my time of death draws near
and yours as well,
We to be drowned upon sorrow, forevermore.

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by SNP·Jan 22, 2012

I was really feelin where you was coming from in this piece.

"I've sinned for you, not for I.
I've loved no one but myself.
I dream of no one but I."

 

That sounds like the way I am sometimes.

 

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by Tussy·Apr 6, 2012

It gets kind of lonely if all you think of is you...

Love the poem though.