My life.
I lay here in this lonely bed,
Surrounded by these paper covered walls,
thinking about my past and all who was in it.
I think of what little i've accomplished and all the bad i've done.
I cry.
My life has become nothing.
Rare friends come around that i lose.
The music blares.
It heals but also reminds.
Tears are shed while memories are spread.
I glance to the photos of the good times.
I miss my friends.
I've become worthless, just as a penny.
I miss my friends.
I've become worthless.
But i'm still young, i can grow.
I hear doors slamming and voices screaming.
Argument.
All they do is fight.
It's unsoothing.
I turn my music louder and close my eyes.
My memories become videos from the past.
I watch to enjoy.
A smile, followed by tears.
I miss that.
What have i become?
A monster.
I never see friends i enjoy anymore.
What can i do?
Try to go back to what's probably lost?
I don't know.
Lonely isn't so bad.
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11 02 2010.
Wow, great sense of sadness.
Wow, great sense of sadness. Very well put together, it was also a great pleasure reading it. I hope you are no longer in that state, but if you are I hope you will overcome very soon.
Benison,
McKenzie.
08 31 2010.
deep but great :) nice poem
deep but great :)
nice poem
09 01 2010.
racheal--JOIN THE
racheal--JOIN THE CLUB!!!--LOL--NOBODY LIKES ME!!!!...and I can't understand that as I'm ay fairly likable kinda guy!!!--My only problem is I'm too smart and friends cannot lie ta me....and everybody lies....so I learned....except me--I'm smart at some things, but stoopid in real life....KNOW WAT I MEAN?--LOL--I can live with it--LOL--I GOTTA LIVE WIT IT!!!--I like poetry that rhymes, but there is some good non-rhyming poetry that is good and can hold my attention enuff so I'll read it--Your poem was one such poem and a good read--We all need ta accept who we are--Nothing is going to change who we are....ever....and that's cool--HUGS to you, child!!!!--They may not like us, but do WE LIKE THEM???--LOL--GOOD WRITING!!!--CJ
09 02 2010.
I felt this one. Thanks for
I felt this one. Thanks for sharing it.
09 07 2010.
Emotional and very great
Emotional and very great
09 24 2010.
it makes me think of past
it makes me think of past piane
11 04 2010.
Much Love, I Feel It, Weird
Much Love,
I Feel It,
Weird how sometimes it takes someone elses words to speak your mind.
11 11 2010.
i think its so hard to write
i think its so hard to write a poem without rhyming put u damn well pulled it off. much respect
11 12 2010.
love the last line, it
love the last line, it grounds it all~
11 18 2010.
I can totally relate greatly
I can totally relate
greatly written. I loved it.