opening the door
you open the door to something unexpected
just to take a look see
and then you realize something more open minded
to a big land of an open sea
full of opportunities, chances, anything we want it to be
life brings all kinds of everything to our door
but love is what we want knocking
to have that someone we choose to be with
to be happy and also the suffering
its not only about feeling happy with this someone
but knowing their worth the pain
we just need to take action
and know this one is not the same
you know its different when all you can do is adore them
the beauty inside and out
when you know they complete you
and you know what their about
love is what we want knocking at our door
to share our world and theirs
to create what we want
and to have something at ours
11 04 2010.
"Life brings all kinds of
"Life brings all kinds of everything to our door, but love is what we want knocking". This is so true and I love how you worded it!
11 04 2010.
thank u:) i try still needa
thank u:) i try still needa work on my skills to go up to your level
11 04 2010.
This is the beauty in poetry.
This is the beauty in poetry. I don't think there are levels, but one's own style. We all have poetry inside of us and it is up to us to search deep within ourselves to bring out our highest potential. I found that over the years sometimes we (ourselves) can be our own enemy. If you can get over your own obsticals, whether it be physically; or in poetry's case Emotionally then you have opened up a whole new realm. I hope to encourage and inspire humbly. We are all on the same level. :) God bless!
11 05 2010.
ok you convinced me haha we
ok you convinced me haha we all got our own style.i guess that's why poetry will always be around.but thank u again u actually do encourage n inspire me to more. so i would like to thank u:) i hope i could inspire you too ;) haha idk how that would happen m just saying.God bless
11 05 2010.
FOr me a Single word can
FOr me a Single word can inspire me to write a two page poem lol. I get inspired by a lot of things. Have faith in yourself :)