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Opposing Thoughts

Shivering still.
Numbing feel.
Fever chills.
Opposites kill.

Two Opposites going opposite ways
Opposites attracted to opposite things
Are these Opposites one in the same?
Opposites pulled by opposite reins.

Opposites tainted by the opposite crowds
Constructed opposite opinions now
Opposing teams playing opposite games
Are these Opposites one in the same?

Love desired love and Lust demanded lust
But falling for lust just seems so unjust
Just when Love felt enough was enough
Lust fell in love and Love wanted lust.

Opposites wanted opposite things
Are these Opposites one in the same?
Can Love and Lust find lustrous love?
These Opposites did what opposites does.

Still, shivering.
Feeling numb.
Chilly fevers.
Opposites won

Comments

Solo's picture

You did real good on this

You did real good on this poem. I love the flow, style and point.

ShannonMason's picture

Thanks! It's one of my first

Thanks!
It's one of my first =)

sanctus's picture

nicely written

nicely written

nebula7693's picture

It is a very well thought out

It is a very well thought out work. It flows nicely and has that "things that make you go hmmm" quality to it. Very well done. Keep them coming.

Poetic Mind's picture

dis poem go so hard looking

dis poem go so hard looking farward to readin more for you

♔GlitterMeRainah♔'s picture

Good job. Really well

Good job.
Really well written. And amazing for it being one of your first :)