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In the shadows of innocence
devil resides
in the heaven of earth
darkness abides
slow monotonous aimless strides
walk through the meadow
look in the eyes
eyes - without expression emotion and consideration
-stoned
looking at you, piercing your heart
grabbing it...drawing out
blood, veins and tears
where are you going?
heavens! this is too much to bear
everyday gloomy
everyday i cry
i do not want to live
i am living just to die...

 

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martin mcdonald's picture
by martin mcdonald·Jul 11, 2010

i am walking wth this person. we will hold our ground.

richa's picture
by richa·Jul 11, 2010

u feel the same way?
i understand ...

Stalkr's picture
by Stalkr·Jul 11, 2010

Thanks for comment.Nice poem btw , I see you too use poems to describe your state of mind or mood.Nice work :)

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by Tha Best Poet·Jul 11, 2010

nice poem and flow

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by mthgld411·Jul 11, 2010

i've read some long poems and I sometimes write poems that are kinda long but your's is somewhat short and to the point. I can completely understand you. At times I feel the same way. I truly do like your last 2 lines great way to end your poem ...

Shéila Lorraine's picture
by Shéila Lorraine·Jul 11, 2010

I can feel your words. I, too have felt this pain.

richa's picture
by richa·Jul 12, 2010

thnks....u ppl r wonderful!

Solo's picture
by Solo·Jul 18, 2010

nice poem

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by GlowingIdols·Jul 23, 2010

very nicely done, Life is also love, whether evil or good, I pray for the good side although our moods tend to change alot these days.....

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by k-otik·Jul 24, 2010

great flow on this piece. and i think everyone goes thru those slumps. good topic to touch on