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It takes a lot
to take all the pride, confidence, and love I've got.
I once sought
you were a great person in and out.
But, I took you for granted
beneath my snout.
You weren't who
you appeared to
be, but only a cheater
a thief of
many things.
Don't forget a little bit of a creep.
Leave me alone
I'm tired of it all.
Don't stall my time.
You're the prime
reasoning to my
suffering.

-Mae Sinclaire

Comments

BlueJay's picture

You make very good poems

You make very good poems

Solo's picture

This made me laugh but in all

This made me laugh but in all seriousness you never really know somebody until you really know somebody. Sometimes it takes knowing somebody for awhile to really know who they truly are. I've been deeply hurt a few times by some girls after they showed their true colors. I was hurt because by that time I was falling in love with them. But as karma comes and goes I've done more than a few girls the same way so I got what I deserved :(
The poem was great.

MaeeaM's picture

Ahah, I laughed a bit at it

Ahah, I laughed a bit at it as well. When I wrote it, I was a bit sad, but at the same time happy so I couldn't take much seriously.