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Snatched Heart

You've snatched
up my heart.
Until it turned tart,
you threw it away
to turn bitter
through out our saddest days.
Insane it might sound.
A love story gone bad,
But, you split my heart in more pieces than two.
It shattered like glass,
and you hesitated to clean it up so fast.
You just left it to pierce my insides,
with my black blood oozing from the wounds.
Soon you'll be back.
Oneday.

-Mae Sinclaire

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Solo's picture

I like the last two lines

I like the last two lines "Soon you'll be back. Oneday".
Yup you got to stay optimistic about the future and when they come back you might not want them anymore. That's how it is a lot of times and I've been on both ends of it. You have a style of poetry that I haven't read on here. With a lot of your poetry you attack the cause but you also show compassion and I love it.