STILL I CRY FOR YOU ( By AXE )
ONE TROUBLED HEAD SPEAKS
ONE HUMBLE HEART LISTENS
ONE MAN IS REPREMANDED FOR HIS HONESTY
ONE SOUL BECOMES AWAKENED
WHILST THE OTHER IDLY SLEEPS
AND ONE DAY IS LOST IN HOURS OF MEDIOCRITY
BUT STILL I CRY FOR YOU
AND STILL I WOULD DIE FOR YOU
IN THE RESURRECTED GARDEN
ONLY GOOD SEEDS GROW
BUT THE WEIGHT OF EXPECTATION IS NOT EASILY IGNORED
AS THE HUNGER PANGS CRY OUT LIKE LITTLE CHILDREN LOST
WHILST THE CROPS ARE CULTIVATED
BY THE MAN WHO WEILDS THE SWORD
BUT STILL I CRY FOR YOU
AND STILL I WOULD DIE FOR YOU
IN A BED OF BROKEN PROMISES
THE INSOMNIAC STILL DREAMS
UTOPIAN ILLUSIONS TO SATISFY HIS MIND
AS HE CLINGS ON TO ALL EMPTY HOPE
HIS DESPERATION SEEMS
TO BE THE ONLY SOLACE HIS IGNORANCE CAN FIND
BUT STILL I CRY FOR YOU
AND STILL I WOULD DIE FOR YOU
Any Feedback Welcomed



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I wish we could all suffer
I wish we could all suffer from nirvanic insomnia. That sentence was inspired by you.
Nice one brother x
Nice one brother x
Great poem!
Great poem!
Thank you - comments from
Thank you - comments from such an accomplished poet are much appreciated x
Congratulations!!! axepete
Congratulations!!! axepete for the poem of the week with your awesome write of "Still I Cry for You."
congrats for having the best
congrats for having the best poem of the week
Hey lookie, lookie.. poem of
Hey lookie, lookie.. poem of the week :))
Congrats...glad to see you there
Thanks very much everyone for
Thanks very much everyone for taking the time to read the poem x
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