This Shiver

Submitted by anji2011 on Thu, 01/20/2011 - 1:51pm |

Love Poem

This heart, those eyes
bare truth, no lies
This shiver, those lips
I feel it to my finger tips

This soul, those words
unlike any I've ever heard
These thoughts, that man
makes me feel like no one can

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Comments

zannychic2002
01 20 2011.

I like the poem. I really like how you used the word "bare" to describe truth when you could have just as easily written "bear". Using that word gives the meaning you want and at the same time evokes the symbolism of the other word. This allows the reader to understand your poem in two ways. I don't think you could have achieved that with any other word there. Great job!