kittensdaughter

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Joined: Jan 18 2011

Points: 210

Groups: Beginner Poets, Freestyle Poets, Poetry Monsters, Poets of our time

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Country: UINTED STATES

State: Colorado

City: Colorado Springs

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About kittensdaughter

Gender: Female

Bio: I'm a 20 year old, with a 1 year old child. I'm getting a divorce, and I enjoy writing poetry. I try writing from the heart, and just hope to get my work recognized, and critiqued. I'm also a huge part of EchosPlanet.com for whomever may be interested.

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Griffihn » kittensdaughter mind if i ask something of you for starters? make the poems a bit longer. they give the impression that you're suppressing feelings/words... 3 days ago
Griffihn » kittensdaughter ok... just don't say i didn't warn you >:) 3 days ago
Griffihn » kittensdaughter if u want critiques, i can give u that but just be warned: i can be somewhat harsh about it. 4 days ago

Poems and Quotes by kittensdaughter

Self Interpretation

Submitted by kittensdaughter on Sun, 01/23/2011 - 5:19pm |

Driving forward,
Narrow lane,
You in control

The scene changes,
Slick roads,
You swerve

You're watching your life play out,
The car sits still,
Half bent around a pole

You're shaken,

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Objects of Faith

Submitted by kittensdaughter on Fri, 01/21/2011 - 6:19pm |

Objects of faith,
Mirrored in our youth

So lost,
In a world of dreams

What is it I desire?

Your love so pure,
It sings of an angel's touch

The faith of a child,
So close and sweet

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Motivated

Submitted by kittensdaughter on Thu, 01/20/2011 - 6:07pm |

An arrow pointing North,
That's where I'll head

A sigh in the wind,
Is all you'll hear

Go ahead and try my defenses,
They'll just wear you down

I'll make the best,
Of your very worst

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Given False Hope

Submitted by kittensdaughter on Wed, 01/19/2011 - 7:27pm |

You made my life a dream,
A dream worth living,
A dream worth feeling

You give me hope,
Hope about what I want,
What I can achieve

You give me faith,
Faith to reach my goals,

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Hurt

Submitted by kittensdaughter on Wed, 01/19/2011 - 7:12pm |

My heart lay in pieces,
Upon a cold stone floor

Through hell's gateway,
Demons come pouring out

My soul weeps,
Through the pain of it all

A few misunderstandings,

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My reality

Submitted by kittensdaughter on Wed, 01/19/2011 - 7:01pm |

Why shouldn't I hang onto negativity,
When that's the only thing around me?

Cast away,
A black sheep

It's all I've ever known,
Even with all my laughter

Endless pits of death,
And abuse

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A Need For Punishment

Submitted by kittensdaughter on Wed, 01/19/2011 - 4:30pm |

A rose garden full of fallen petals,
Romantic in its own way
With gray skies and cold wind,
Whipping around my face
As I go down on my knees,
And weep for my sins

I have been hurt,

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Deserted

Submitted by kittensdaughter on Tue, 01/18/2011 - 1:39am |

The blood runs down my hands,
As my heart clenches in agony

My face is wet from tears,
My breathing rapid and shallow

I ask myself "why?"
Was I not good enough?

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Posts by kittensdaughter

Type	Updated date	Comments	Last Post
Poem	Self Interpretation Sunday, 2011, January 23 - 5:19pm	1	by Landsleyalex91 Jan 23 2011 - 5:37pm
Poem	Given False Hope Wednesday, 2011, January 19 - 7:27pm	2	by Griffihn Jan 22 2011 - 8:16pm
Poem	Objects of Faith Friday, 2011, January 21 - 6:19pm		by kittensdaughter Jan 21 2011 - 6:19pm
Poem	Motivated Thursday, 2011, January 20 - 6:07pm		by kittensdaughter Jan 20 2011 - 6:07pm
Poem	Hurt Wednesday, 2011, January 19 - 7:12pm		by kittensdaughter Jan 19 2011 - 7:12pm
Poem	My reality Wednesday, 2011, January 19 - 7:01pm		by kittensdaughter Jan 19 2011 - 7:01pm
Poem	A Need For Punishment Wednesday, 2011, January 19 - 4:30pm		by kittensdaughter Jan 19 2011 - 4:30pm
Poem	Deserted Tuesday, 2011, January 18 - 1:39am	2	by zannychic2002 Jan 18 2011 - 11:34am

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