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Every comment is very appreciated... big or small,long or short, good or bad
When ever would be great ;)
i left you some comments zanny
I'd like feedback too :)! Nothing long but just to help me out if you can! Thank you! :)
i just started writing poetry and i was wondering if you could give me some feedback to let me know if im doing good so far
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nothing but emptiness,stuck in a trench
never this angry before,my fists clenched
regreting the day i ever told you yes
how could you be so inconsiderate making my life such a mess
i only wish you could know the pain i feel to this day
working my feelings like they were made of clay
the way you used me when your true self was elsewhere
and what i thought was my strongest muscle i felt tear
all that wasted time never to be recovered
i will never forgive you for the way you made me suffer
very nice rhyming
I think it's a great because you are talking about how you feel
Please give me +/- feedback :)
Hi I'm new here too. I just posted my first poem. If you don't mind I would like for you to look at it. Thanks for the support!
I would appreciate feedback on my poem Therapy..it has 3 parts...ithink that u"ll like it
I've always been a poet, just recently coming out. I'll be very appreciative if u read and pass on my poems. Thanks- Blyth
You commented on some of mine but i put some other ones up. can you please look at them? thank you (:
Oh, and could you tell me your honest opinion of them? i don't want you to just be nice and everything. i want someones honest opinion. Thank you.
Hi, please leave me a comment. Thank you.
oh, please sire. i would appreciate a feedback on my poems :)
arigatou guziamsu! *bows*
i would like feedback i just started an have only 1 poem and i woul loke to know how to make it better and any bad or gokd coments plz :)
sure tell me what you think about my poetry
Hi,this is one of my favorites.Your opinion would be greatly appreciated.I posted this here the other day but must have done something wrong so this is a second attempt.Thanks
Romance whispere to her heart
Autumn is the prettiest time of life,
Changing colours and less strife,
When beauty increases in many a maid
And summer repeats not ready to fade.
Autumn breezes caress her soul
Seeking to make her heart whole,
While tears gather upon her marrow,
She seeks out a new tomorrow.
That empty hole when one's alone
Is borne heavy as an anchor stone,
For youth has flown forever gone,
And eternity waits not far on.
In sleep beckons a faceless brough,
That eludes her,yet somehow,
She feels love's tender caress
As romance whispers to her heart.
She wakes refreshed sure in mind
That someone awaits pure and kind'
To share days and nights to short,
When bliss is freed in love's cavort.
great job hawqeye
"For youth has flown forever gone, And eternity waits not far on."
that's some awesome poetry
Thanks very much.I've written a 'hym' early Monday morning that I think is better than that.Here it is.Hope you like it.
Salvation
Sweet Jesus I owe everything to you and to you alone,
You have shown me my home,you are my anchorstone,
You have saved me always when stormy winds have blown, ,
You have always been my rock,the truest friend I've known,, .
And why do you think me worthy as a seed you have sown
What can I ever do to earn all the love you've shown
.Ch:
Let me know sweet Jesus, let me know beyond my days
Let me know my savior,when I bow down to you in praise,
When my time here is drawing short and coming to a close,
As they carry me away after leading the life I chose,
I pray that I will leave not sorrow for those that I love,
But instead to know the joy that waits for us above.
I am not a wealthy man but I am very rich by far,
When I walk my journey you're my guiding star
And you know that I am honest in all the things I do,
I have never born false witness,I only say what's true,
You have strengthened my soul before I even knew
Of life's losses with your love to see me through.
You have always had your hand placed within my soul,
You have shown me your light that has made me whole,
I have never known this love that comes from your grace,
Nor have I known compasion that shines from your face,
For I am still a sinner and you are the son of God
I can only meet you after I've slept beneath the sod.
William Marshall
Note:Couldn't sleep after listening to 'Salvation' from Springhill.Got up at 3:30 AM
and finished this at 4:16 AM.June 6/"11
Would love some feedback on my poem Devotion . Thank You
stop by if you have the time =D
I think I've left everybody at least one comment :)
if more poeple want a comment just leave a request
let me hear it, good or bad
people want me to be more detailed with my comments
so yes I will try
Just put a new poem on here. Please could you comment on it. Your last comments were realy helpful. Thank you
I would really appreciate it (: