My dark pit of despair.

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The dense darkness envelopes me like a smothering shroud

​that seeps into my bones and very soul

As I fall deeper and deeper into a lonely pit of despair

​where my mind is tortured by intrusive turbilant thoughts 

Thattcursinglyy swirl around and around in my mind

​that are just too much to bare

​and  the icy cold grip of apathy takes it's grip on me.

 

My wretched body lays helpless

​upon a floor of sharp cutting shards of glass soul 

as my will and and battered  soul departs

​with excruciating   fear and dread

And the the deep wounds of my tender heart

Is cut to shredss as if with a sharpened knife

As life quietly slips away

​void of all hope love and happiness.

 

I try to escape my hellish dwelling

And the putrid stench of decay

But the hideous tormenting Ravens gather

With their beady hungry eyes

Waiting for the right time to pounce

and devour my tender flesh

​with their sharp pecking beaks

and ripping claw

to send me into the terror of darkness once more

​leaving me bruised battered and bewildered like before.

 

But I keep on trying to escape until one day

My darkness dissipates and I see the sun again

and start to live and join the human race

Again.

 

 

Peter Dome.copyright.2013.

 

 

Behind The Poem: 

Depression.


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by Adele W·Jan 22, 2013

This is a Magnificent piece Moogie!!  I agree with you.  We all fight our dark side to bring in more light fore some things in this life ain't right!!  You're awesome!!  Stay Blessed King!!  Much Love and Respect to You!!  I LOVE your style!!:-)

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by moogster·Jan 22, 2013

Thank you so much your Majesty, you are always so kind, hope your ok. You know, your not too bad yourself, pretty Lady. My only wish would be, no one would feel like this. Glad you enjoyed it. I  really appreciate you stopping by. Take good care my friend. My warmest best wishes, from the other side of the pond. Moogie.

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by Adele W·Jan 27, 2013

Anytime my friend.  Everyone has went through this this feeling one time or another.  Some beings within this world, make this life hard for some to deal with at different times.  The devil shifts into beings and different places and certain people will experience that feeling but it is up to the individual to fight for their happiness if they truly want to be happy.  They will find ways to make themself happy and be around positive people who will uplift their spirits.  Keep your head up Moogie!!  You are so talented my King and you are loved and thought of!! Stay Blessed and don't allow the stress to get the best of your beautiful spirit that I see in your lovely masterpieces!!  You are strong and it won't be long that you will be filled with glee and happy for eternity!!  I LOVE you Moogie and you will be in my meditation today!!  I am sending you nothing but srong positive love and vibes King!!

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by twelveof8·Jan 22, 2013

I know that place well my friend. I'd throw you a rope to climb out if I knew but how!

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by moogster·Jan 22, 2013

Thank you so much my friend. I was in two minds whether I should post this or not, as I didn't want to upset anyone going through any trauma. I knew would want to help if you could, you're that kind of person I'm sure. I'd do the same for you if I could. So sorry you know this place too. I just pray you will see the sun again. Take good care. Best wishes. Moogie.

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by twelveof8·Jan 22, 2013

Thank you. You know we must make it to spring and then mother nature herself will throw us a bit of rope to help us climb out.

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by moogster·Jan 22, 2013

I love that, yes we must. Thank you so much. Take good care. Moogie.

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by twelveof8·Jan 22, 2013

You take care as well moogie. Hugs!

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by Larry_Skyllz·Jan 27, 2013

I'm definitely feeling this piece, I know the place all to well...keep fighting man you'll get out

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by moogster·Jan 27, 2013

Thank you so much Larry. Always great to hear from you my friend. So sorry you know this place. Just remember you're not alone, many feel like us. Just remember, God loves you, take hold of his hand Bro. Keep writing your wonderful poems, you are a great talent no doubt about that. It's my therapy. In my thoughts and prayers mate. Take good care. Best wishes. Moogie. Hang on in there pal.