The real definition of Love

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Submitted by theSoulist on Tue, 01/22/2013 - 7:22pm
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How you love me if you never lived this life before, you say you love me

forever

but you so ugly in different

life-forms, now that’s a different definition of eyesores, love weigh heavy in my heart, and

my love is, never

minor, the time a, man like me define the, symbolic but, ever so demonic

thunder,

that plunders, our hearts into a cold but yet lonely summer,

cause when you remember, that souls and hearts don't dismember,

that’s when you learn that the cold do not belong to the summer, but only to

lonely nights in

december

so what kind

of love do you really want to remember,

better yet let me ask you this, what kind of love do you really want to cherish,

because its apparent, that life is love, through the eyes of the parents, marriage is the love, that I soon want to inherit, and the children, one day I will

reveal them, wield them, show them wisdom and give them, objects that understand symbols, and

as I kiss their soft but ever so

beautiful dimples, and lay them in bed and,

tell them, that life is simple, I will one day remember, that love is something

that they

will only dream of, like these doves, these beautiful white doves that only fly in the name....of.... their

sweet love

Behind The Poem: 

Its several ways that someone can define love, lets see if this way is the proper way, comment and rate ppl :)


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Jewele H's picture
Submitted by Jewele H on Tue, 01/22/2013 - 7:34pm.

I love everything about this poem. I can picture you reading this at a poetry jam, no lie. I couldn't stop reading this, please write more! :)

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Submitted by theSoulist on Tue, 01/22/2013 - 7:35pm.

aww thanks, this is a spoken word poem originally, I revised it a lot before I put it up here, cause I always performed this one, never written it, but I'm soo glad that you like it that make me happy :)

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Submitted by Larry_Skyllz on Tue, 01/22/2013 - 11:12pm.

smooth poem Mr. Soulist

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Submitted by theSoulist on Wed, 01/23/2013 - 11:56am.

Thanks my man! More coming

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Submitted by Soul2Squeeze on Wed, 01/23/2013 - 10:34am.

This is deep. Highly personal, but that's what allows another to empathize and interpret the writer's point of view. The last seven lines are heartfelt. I like how you transitioned the poem from dark to light. Much respect, 1LoVeenlightened

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Submitted by theSoulist on Wed, 01/23/2013 - 12:06pm.

I try my best and I'm realty glad that you enjoyed it! I usually don't write love poems but I gave it a try this time

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Submitted by SNP on Thu, 01/24/2013 - 6:29pm.

Nice one dog that's real and love should be real, not that fake stuff.

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Submitted by theSoulist on Thu, 01/24/2013 - 8:32pm.

Thanks man! I feel like that's the best way to define love