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Submitted by darkened angel on Thu, 02/02/2012 - 8:46am |
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the world stands stil.

My heart is stoped.

My breath is heavy.

My body is trembling.

your eyes gaze upon mine,

holding me in a trance,

and stoping all time


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Xxshey96xX
02 02 2012.

wow that is wicked good

wow that is wicked good

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Shi
02 02 2012.

I really liked that... I like

I really liked that... I like you other poems too.

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na898810
02 02 2012.

Amazing!!!

Amazing!!!


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