4 Corners

Submitted by BreannaN. on Wed, 09/15/2010 - 12:20pm |

Love Poem

What's Real
What's Fake
What's Love
What's Hate
Because they all surround me.
Day & niqht nothing in sight but the walls.
As i began to glare irealize no one will ever walk through that door.
Who Cares
Who Doesnt
This is Love or was it ?
Because still no one has enetered that door & the walls are slowly closing in.
My heart starts to pain , this is driving me insane .. can anybody hear it?
The sound is silent & its driving me crazy that you left me with nothing but a pen & the lyrics in mind.
This was .. but now this is the end .
The walls of my heart have finally caved in.

Comments

Stephanie McKenzie
09 15 2010.

This is a nice poem, but very

This is a nice poem, but very emotional. I enjoyed reading it. Great job Breanna and keep your head up cuz you are all you got, a lot of hearts don't really care and they won't give you the love and the honesty you need.

Benison,
McKenzie