I Stand To Be Corrected!

Well I appreciated and respected your point of view..
And I should check this poem for errors and review
I'm a novice poet..that's obvious...
But the words I used are pretty serious

Thanks a lot fellow poets for reading my piece....
There's a lot of words in every lines that I've miss
I will promise that I'll improve one day....
But I'm proud because I made it my way

ezrah2010